Thursday, October 8, 2009

Predicament

Ants judged her as she clicked her heels along the dirt road. Squirrels looked at her. Everything stared at her. She didn’t belong! She understood, shit! A twenty-six year old West-LA actress/model/waitress/secretary/assorted walking down Rue de L’Essence, Quebec with a purse full of prozac and stained one dollar bills. Her right heel caught a pebble and before she could damn all that is holy her lips tasted earth and her Matin & Co tailored skirt shredded around her pert waist. It was ten miles to the nearest gas station. but that would only offer
physical salvation.

2 comments:

  1. I like this one a lot. Not sure about how it ends though...

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  2. Same. That's a killer sentence in the middle.

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