Tuesday, February 10, 2009

A Successful Expedition

            They landed on the planet and for the first time, found water. The crew was very happy. They had a water fight. The next day they looked for signs of life. While they were doing that, some aliens stole their spaceship. They sat in the water and cried. The aliens flew around their heads in the spaceship. Then the aliens landed and they were nice. Everyone got along fine. One of the spacemen and one of the aliens fell in love. The other spacemen taught some other aliens to play basketball. A successful expedition. All good on the interplanetary frontier.

3 comments:

  1. So perfectly succinct! Love the last line.

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  2. this is so perfectly painful and i'm not sure why

    it embodies such a sense of futility, destiny, uselessness, and triviality.

    well done sir

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  3. Written in thirty seconds, thanks for giving it meaning guys!

    Oh wait what? I mean I totally spent half the day thinking about it then sat in front of the screen for two hours choosing just the right words.

    Haha oh well...

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