I wake up. Where am I? The stringently white walls and the sterile hum of nurses and machines tips me off. I am in a hospital. I struggle to prop myself up, but a gloved hand pushes me down.
“Please don’t move, sir, we’re monitoring your vitals.”
The glove releases my shoulder and jumps back to scrawling notes on a yellow legal pad.
“He’s conscious,” a nurse says.
I snort, but can’t because of the tubes, so I hack and choke instead.
She looks at me. I look back. She looks away.
I close my eyes and sink back into--
mmmmm i like -- but consider "this is what it's like to be patient" ...?
ReplyDeleteI changed it. what do you think?
ReplyDeleteI like it a lot better now! Also the third to last line is awesome and gruesome.
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